Antigone Cadmus

Quote: until they happened upon the forest road. It might be the lack of my English vocabulary, but I don't understand this. They happened? Are you sure you have the ...

Hey! Texan Writer covered most of the nitpicks. Since this is so short, I'll just address a few points that bothered me... 'I would like to meet you today,’ Joe ...

Hello, sarahstepp! Welcome to Young Writers Society. You and your father are writing a story together? That's so sweet! Unfortunately, this is simply waaayyy too much to review. Many users ...

Here. We. Go. I-- Nit Picks when all humans were considered friend. Little bitty grammar error here. All the humans were considered friend? It needs an s, m' dear. ^_^ ...

Hey! I see you don't have many reviews on this. I think I'll be able to tell you why that is. This is simply too long . I copied and ...

Hey Acta! Welcome to YWS! You're right -- this is a bit wordy compared to most stories posted here. I put this into Microsoft Word, and it was eight pages ...

Hey Loveless! Are you named after the anime? I love that show! Anywayyy, onto your review! Welcome to YWS! First, I must tell you that we have an absolute rule ...

Heellooo, Doodle! Here (finally) as requested! A waxy globe hung high in the dark sky that was speckled with little white dots, peeking out from behind clouds. Meh. Waxy is ...

Hiya, Lethero! Rosey Unicorn, who you requested a review from, doesn't like werewolf stories, I'm afraid (you'll see in her rules supernatural and horror are no-nos). But! I, however, love ...

Hey, Mizz-iceberg! Here as requested! :wink: No reviews yet? :( Time to change that! :D And yes... emoticons are amazing. :smt026 Your Review! Okay, first of all, how did you ...

Hey, tigs6969! :wink: Tigs is one of my nicknames here. Welcome to YWS! You seem pretty new. I think the reason no one has critiqued this is because... well... it's ...

Geez... it took me a long time to get to this. :oops: As I explained to you, my computer decided to erase your review. So let's try again, shall we? ...

Hey, Asxz! Here as requested! (and if you can't remember requesting a review from Antigone, it's because I recently had a name change. Yes, I used to be the user ...

Hey, Rosey! :wink: Here as requested! The rock grated and screeched, threatening to cave in the tunnels around me. Meh. I just don't like this line. First of all, I ...

Hello, mirandamaddness! I'll be your reviewer today! Look at my custom title. "The Classicist." I'm going to bug you a bit about your Greek Roots. :wink: I’m pretty much your ...